18
2016
05

一个墨尔本的移民律师,小姑娘,很厉害,雅思可以考8分,PTE 托福110 澳洲代考 澳洲枪手 雅思枪手 替考


Scientists often tell people what activities are good for the health of people, while others are bad. But most people continue with unhealthy activities. Why? Solutions.

 

It is a fact that scientists know what it is best for our body and which activities we should practise to remain or become healthy. However, we often see people surround us often do the contrary to what being told by the scientists. Here are some reasons that people continue with unhealthy activities as well as suggestions that may help people to change their behaviour.

03
2016
05

一个大牛写的,绝对是牛逼啊,雅思8分 PTE 80分

Topic 1: choosing a suitable career is a problem that faces many young people. What are the
reasons? What suggestion would you give to them to help them make the right decision?

Every year as 20-somethings leave their college campuses and enter the professional workforce,
they must cope with the same challenges.

Although a diploma has equipped young people with the technical and intellectual tools, choosing a
career is probably as overwhelming as choosing a major. For some who are trained in a highly
specialized field such as maths and science, starting a career could mean an entry-level position in
an industry related to their studies. For some others, choosing a career isn't necessarily easy.
Students who majored in the humanities for example, might not find a position that is directly linked
with their academic training. They might have to re-evaluate their skill sets and edit their résumés to
highlight the applicability of their diplomas.

However difficult the job search is, there are some general guidelines for everyone. First, young
people should be open to jobs in all fields. They should not limit their search by their own majors, or
should they a quickly dismiss a job position because it has nothing to do with their degrees. Like
trying on shoes, you would never know if the shoe fits unless you try it on.

Second, a career takes time to plan and strategize. A young person might have to make some
compromises in the short term to reach their ultimate goal. For example, an art history graduate
wants the career of a curator, but finds only administrative positions or internships open at the
moment. The advice is to take the position and gradually transition to their "dream job". The
experience is not only a meaningful addition to one's resume, but also an opportunity to familiarize
oneself with all aspects of the industry.

Lastly, young people should keep in mind that there are always jobs that have not been created yet.
Blogging and freelancing were once unimaginable to job seekers in the past. The rapid
transformations brought about by technology mean that there are always ways to build a career, if
you are creative enough.

21
2016
04

这篇是雅思7分不到的作文,我找了我美国朋友批改了下,很专业的修改,赞一个

Solving environmental problems should be the responsibility of one international organization instead of state or national government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An increasing numbers of environmental problems make both institutions and governments
[mg1] concerned. I believe that solving environmental such problems should not be the responsibility of one international organization alone.

To begin with, it is seems that international organizations such as World Wildlife Fund or WWF, are more indeed
[mg2]  professionals in on solving environment problems. The international These organizations have has the ability to call for experts in related relative fields from all over all of the globe. Most of them possess highly specialized knowledge and rich experiences on environmental issues. Additionally, a great deal of resources are is [mg3] available in and are used byfor international organizations such as. automated detection machines, advanced robots, and support equipments[mg4]  which are used by international would be far more effective on in solving environmental problems. Furthermore, international organizations can be able to gather the helps from various countries and take charge of international cooperation,; and thus, can effectively solve the environmental issues.

However, it is generally accepted that one of the government's unique functions is legislation which the government can standardizes behaviors in managing and improving environmental protection through policies so that the serious problems would be controlled to some extent. Besides, the policies about environmental protection are authorized and convincing. Therefore, the rules and regulations are easy to be implemented and then achieve good effects on environmental protection.
[mg5] Last but not least, Finally, the government can also provide enough funds and equipments when necessary during the process of problem solving.
[mg6] 
In conclusion, I think that the long-term environmental problems solving should depend on the joint efforts from all institutions all over of the world.

12
2016
04

她人还行,以前在英国留学过,现在回国在上海金融公司工作,雅思7分,妥妥的,澳洲雅思替考 代考

Some say the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be useful to society; others say the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambition. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some contends that the sole purpose our education is to prepare our young to be useful to our society, other contends that our education system should focus on helping them to fulfill their dreams. I tend to agree the later-A truly successful education should encompass individual ambition rather than rely on utilitarian side of society usefulness.

29
2016
03

我比较喜欢这个姑娘性格,人也靠谱踏实,雅思8分,澳洲雅思替考 OET考试 PTE 代考

In modern society, fashion is becoming more highly valued in people’s choice of clothes. Why? Do you think it is a positive or negative development.

 

23
2016
03

这个小弟,可屌了,雅思考过9分,超级牛逼啊,澳洲雅思代考 PTE 枪手 替考

">Topic 1: choosing a suitable career is a problem that faces many young people. What are the
reasons? What suggestion would you give to them to help them make the right decision?
Every year as 20-somethings leave their college campuses and enter the professional workforce,
they must cope with the same challenges.
Although a diploma has equipped young people with the technical and intellectual tools, choosing a
career is probably as overwhelming as choosing a major. For some who are trained in a highly
specialized field such as maths and science, starting a career could mean an entry-level position in
an industry related to their studies. For some others, choosing a career isn't necessarily easy.
Students who majored in the humanities for example, might not find a position that is directly linked
with their academic training. They might have to re-evaluate their skill sets and edit their résumés to
highlight the applicability of their diplomas.
However difficult the job search is, there are some general guidelines for everyone. First, young
people should be open to jobs in all fields. They should not limit their search by their own majors, or
should they a quickly dismiss a job position because it has nothing to do with their degrees. Like
trying on shoes, you would never know if the shoe fits unless you try it on.
Second, a career takes time to plan and strategize. A young person might have to make some
compromises in the short term to reach their ultimate goal. For example, an art history graduate
wants the career of a curator, but finds only administrative positions or internships open at the
moment. The advice is to take the position and gradually transition to their "dream job". The
experience is not only a meaningful addition to one's resume, but also an opportunity to familiarize
oneself with all aspects of the industry.
Lastly, young people should keep in mind that there are always jobs that have not been created yet.
Blogging and freelancing were once unimaginable to job seekers in the past. The rapid
transformations brought about by technology mean that there are always ways to build a career, if
you are creative enough.

19
2016
03

雅思替考 PTE 代考 枪手托福代考 ,一个上海姑娘写的雅思7分作文,很美丽

 

Nowadays, with living standards becoming higher and higher, more people are able to afford household appliances such as TV, microwave, oven and rice cooker. In my opinion, that is a positive phenomenon which stands for a more efficient and convenient life.

10
2016
03

一个培训机构的姑娘,水平不错的,雅思7分,就是脾气不好,哎 人无完人啊

In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society?

Coupled with the rapid development in medical science and life quality, people are able to live longer, and the proportion of old people are rising at a steady pace. However, whether it has more positive or negative impacts is certainly a contentious one.

Granted, with the increase of senior citizens, the younger generation acquire more opportunities to spend time with their senior relatives. They could enjoy a large family gathering, sharing their happiness, sadness and problems  with the their great grandparents, during which time they might occasionally acquire several pieces of valuable advice. The rich experiences of the senior members could possibly inspire the junior ones to develop a different way to  cope with grumpy superiors in workplace, for example,writing a long and heart-touching email to an angry boss rather than confronting with him directly. 

However, beneath the seemingly advantageous surface, tremendous negative impacts are troubling and even possibly haunting both individual families and the whole society.  Chief among the problems is the huge financial burden imposed on the younger parents who have to support four or even more orderly members along with their children. They have to pay the utility bills, buy daily necessities,  pay for the intimidating medical expense, or even hire nurses to help them to take care of their senior members, the expense of which could sometimes exceed their yearly income. Another negative influences of rising ratio of old people is that the development of society are slowing down. In particular, the lack of vigorous work force (beyond doubt, most of the elderly are weak in physical strength and not able to engage in labor demanding jobs) are hindering the development of social economy and industry. For example, in China, though it has the largest population in the world, there is a serious shortage of labor-intensive workers in most of areas including construction sites and factories, hindering the further advancement of country.

By way of conclusion, the problems involved in the continuously climbing proportion of aged people far outweigh its benefits, considering the undue financial pressure on families  and the slower development of society.

25
2016
02

一哥们,一边带孩子,一边赚钱养家,而且水平还是这么牛逼,雅思写作8分 7分妥妥的 澳洲雅思 澳洲移民

The  chart gives information about the courses, professors and students of three colleges in a certain province in Canada. 

 

Overall, Seaford College has the highest reputation among three colleges in the aspects of lecturers’ qualifications, course fulfilment and graduates’ employment rate.

 

In terms of the percentages of lecturers with PhD qualifications, Harrison College ranks the lowest, with 30% of lecturers having PhD degree. Brand College has higher proportion of PhD lecturers than Harrison (43%). The majority of lecturers (54%) in Seaford College, by comparison, hold the PhD degree.

 

However, in spite of the highest percentage of PhD degree of lecturers, only 55% of lessons is given top rating by inspectors in Seaford College. In contrast, 69% and 65% of lessons are given top rating in Brand College and Harrison College respectively.

 

The qualifications of lecturers contribute to the proportion of students who complete courses and find jobs within 6 months after graduation. Harrison College has the lowest percentage of course completion (72%). The proportion of completing course is slightly higher in Brand College (79%). Seaford leads the group of completing courses (82%). Similar trend is found in the proportion of students who get employed with 6 months after they graduate. Seaford College has highest proportion of employment rate (93%), followed by Brand College (85%) and Harrison College (80%).

 

In conclusion, the employment rate of students within six months after graduation is high in all three colleges.


25
2016
01

这个是我认得大哥 ,英文水平在整个华东地区都是数得着的,雅思8 9分作文 随便写写 澳洲雅思

The role of advertising has been redefined in the contemporary society. In the past, advertisements served primarily as a source of information for products or services. Now, they begin to permeate into our lives and into our minds, shaping our ideas and lifestyles, and in the course of this, make us look and think in increasingly similar ways.

First of all, many advertisements set a standard model of life through its depiction of a family or a social setting. This makes people believe that as a member of a certain social group, they should dress, speak and behave in the same way as what is suggested in those advertisements. For example, a typical housewife in TV commercials is invariably the same: she uses Unilever products, prepares breakfast for her children and husband, and does all the washing and laundry at home.

Second, the impact of advertisements is immediate and powerful, especially with the aid of modern media and internet technology. Today, whenever a new product is launched into the market, whether it is a cell phone, a new car, or a new fashion brand, millions of consumers become avid followers. They wanted to set themselves different by becoming the first batch of priority users. But they would soon be disappointed because millions of others were doing the same. Just take a look around you and see how many people are carrying an iPhone 6!

Of course, there are competing advertisements featuring rival products. They give people a series of options to choose from. In theory this could make people less identical. Yet in reality, we would find that many people tend to choose only a few long-established brands which they believe are more trustworthy and reliable. So in the end the society gets inevitably homogeneous.

Advertising is a creative industry, but instead of making its intended audience more creative, it often creates a group of loyal customers that purchase the same products, dress in the same way, and live with the same lifestyle. In a word, advertising stymies individuality.